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Mirror Mirror
Mirror mirror on my door
Behind it you must stay
Never will my face you'll see
I might throw you away
Mirror mirror on my door
I don't know why you're here
Waiting for your chance, I guess
To look, laugh and leer
Mirror mirror on my door
Please explain to me
Why everyone who looks, you show beauty
Everyone, except for me
Mirror mirror on my door
If you look at me you might crack
Then seven years bad luck I'll have
But I think I've had worse then that
Mirrir mirror on my door
It's ok to cry
That's how I make it through most days
If not I think I'd die
Mirror mirror on my door
There's no need to fret
Upon your face I will
Literature
Memory
I remember you, quiet man,
plaidly relieved against a backdrop
spangled with motes of starry dust.
I remember you, blue eyes,
all black socks and white sweater,
and the way you used to eat mayonnaise.
I made fun of you for that.
I remember you smiling,
no tubes, no pumps.
And in the blue room, I played a game,
pretending I could keep you here
as long as I stayed awake, imagining
my breath sustaining you-
in and out
in and out
in and out
and once more.
But my heart cramps,
and my eyes are sore,
and this is not so much a poem
as a thinly veiled prayer
that you still guard me as I sleep,
though open
Literature
Hollowdays
Shortened dim days and long starless nights
The wellspring, the windchimes, the starlings
Are gone
Dreary tunes about razorblades, and ash, and bone
The lost man's song, the October sonata
The walkingman shoeheels clack empty sidewalks
Past blank storefronts and soapsmeared windows.
Summer is a distant fire, muted by mist, fog,
Coldbreath
Hollow days are here again.
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So this is the first time in a while that I've finished a poem and immediately wanted to delete it, but every time I've ever done that I've regretted it so I'm uploading it instead. I've just been missing fixed forms, so I was browsing to find new forms to try my hand at. This one is a triolet. Fun to write, but maybe a bit limiting for this subject, which I think I have a lot more to say about. So expect more Gettysburg poetry from me, at some point, if I can figure out what I'm trying to say about it. I live near there, and I just find it so odd how peaceful it is, considering...
Anyway, thoughts appreciated.
Edit: I've tweaked it a bit and now I actually quite like it. Enough in fact to be entering it into the Fixed Form contest.
Anyway, thoughts appreciated.
Edit: I've tweaked it a bit and now I actually quite like it. Enough in fact to be entering it into the Fixed Form contest.
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Do you have some more Gettysburg poetry? This is the first poem of yours that I have seen, and I applaud your work.