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Memory

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Memory flows through the veins of this land;
the earth does not forget the blood that was lost:
it nourished the roots of trees that still stand.
Memory flows through the veins of this land;
whispering past monuments to man,
ghosts roam the fields that armies once crossed.
Memory flows through the veins of this land.
the earth does not forget the blood that was lost.

So this is the first time in a while that I've finished a poem and immediately wanted to delete it, but every time I've ever done that I've regretted it so I'm uploading it instead. :dummy: I've just been missing fixed forms, so I was browsing :iconfixed-form-poetry: to find new forms to try my hand at. This one is a triolet. Fun to write, but maybe a bit limiting for this subject, which I think I have a lot more to say about. So expect more Gettysburg poetry from me, at some point, if I can figure out what I'm trying to say about it. I live near there, and I just find it so odd how peaceful it is, considering...

Anyway, thoughts appreciated. :aww:

Edit: I've tweaked it a bit and now I actually quite like it. Enough in fact to be entering it into the :iconweeklylitcontests: Fixed Form contest. :)
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Do you have some more Gettysburg poetry?  This is the first poem of yours that I have seen, and I applaud your work.